Thank you! Me too tbh, it was the final edit and the experiment was whether it creates a more chaotic, discordant, crowded effect than without the bolding, but not sure if I liked it more before as well! Fun to experiment, glad you enjoyed it and really appreciate the feedback!
Really liked it. I’m in two minds about the bolding, but I enjoyed the pacing and liked the shape when you got to sea.
Thank you! Me too tbh, it was the final edit and the experiment was whether it creates a more chaotic, discordant, crowded effect than without the bolding, but not sure if I liked it more before as well! Fun to experiment, glad you enjoyed it and really appreciate the feedback!